I like the fact that your contents page is aesthetically pleasing, unique and original. I like the cloud shapes you put on your contents pages it makes it more eye catching. To improve you should have taken your front cover image elsewhere as the sun ruins the image. Also you could use brighter colours to attract the readers.
I really like the contents page and the fact that the front page contains a special explosion effect which makes it stand out. The use of clouds around the text on the contents page made it very eye catching.
I really like the way that you used a natural background for both front and contents page. It is also creative with how your colours match the lockers in the background. however i believe it could be good if u used the same colour in the contents page as the front cover. other than that well done my g!
I like how you used the cloud shapes in your contents page it looks unique and I like how you included the link to the LSC website. To improve your covers you could of made the LSC logo more bigger and not add too much text. Overall your front cover and contents page look nice but it's MEDIOCRE ;)
I like the fact that that you have used cloud shapes to put your features because is a unique and original idea compared to everyone elses. To improve you should have made the font size bigger on the cover so it is easier to read.
I like the fact that your contents page is aesthetically pleasing, unique and original. I like the cloud shapes you put on your contents pages it makes it more eye catching. To improve you should have taken your front cover image elsewhere as the sun ruins the image. Also you could use brighter colours to attract the readers.
ReplyDeleteI really like the contents page and the fact that the front page contains a special explosion effect which makes it stand out. The use of clouds around the text on the contents page made it very eye catching.
ReplyDeleteThanks G.
DeleteI really like the way that you used a natural background for both front and contents page. It is also creative with how your colours match the lockers in the background. however i believe it could be good if u used the same colour in the contents page as the front cover. other than that well done my g!
ReplyDeleteThank you, but you know... the haters are gunna hate!
DeleteI like how you used the cloud shapes in your contents page it looks unique and I like how you included the link to the LSC website. To improve your covers you could of made the LSC logo more bigger and not add too much text. Overall your front cover and contents page look nice but it's MEDIOCRE ;)
ReplyDeleteWe will fight.. But taaa :)
DeleteI like the fact that that you have used cloud shapes to put your features because is a unique and original idea compared to everyone elses. To improve you should have made the font size bigger on the cover so it is easier to read.
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