contents: it looks very professional and it portrays your genre very well. I like the use of the different images and the way you've laid out the pages to fit into categories makes it easy to read. To improve you could get rid of some of the empty space you have on the 'every month' section.
Double Page Spread: the text frames the image nicely. To improve you could separate the questions from the answers given by the artist to make it clearer and also putting a title would make the page stand out more.
Cover: I like the colours used and how they go with the clothes the models are wearing but to make them stand out more you could try using a different colour for the text, maybe black, to make the colours the models are wearing stand out even more in contrast to the coverlines.
Your contents page and front page look really colourful. However, the DPS lacks the level of colour the other pages have. Also, the fact that you kept the background white, balances out the colours on the page. This stops the colours being too distracting.
contents: it looks very professional and it portrays your genre very well. I like the use of the different images and the way you've laid out the pages to fit into categories makes it easy to read. To improve you could get rid of some of the empty space you have on the 'every month' section.
ReplyDeleteDouble Page Spread: the text frames the image nicely. To improve you could separate the questions from the answers given by the artist to make it clearer and also putting a title would make the page stand out more.
Cover: I like the colours used and how they go with the clothes the models are wearing but to make them stand out more you could try using a different colour for the text, maybe black, to make the colours the models are wearing stand out even more in contrast to the coverlines.
Your contents page and front page look really colourful. However, the DPS lacks the level of colour the other pages have. Also, the fact that you kept the background white, balances out the colours on the page. This stops the colours being too distracting.
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